B+ (prompt)

Prompt: B+

Write about what you did last weekend as though you’re a music critic reviewing a new album.



You were late.

I was sweating by the pillars at the end of the station, watching girls older, more fashionable than me –  in lipstick and short skirts and with absolute confidence – meet up with THEIR boyfriends a few feet away from me.

I was the girl in the black hoodie and white earbuds blasting at max volume; if I had to watch other couples, at least I didn’t have to hear them.

“She- she screams in silence”


To recap their first album, begins at a breathless, heart pumping pace-

On the escalator, eyes unable to meet, sweaty hands firmly on the handrails,

Punchy lyrics, killer bass-                                                              while the couple in front of us kissed.


Rating: B.

I was sorely disappointed with this new album, the first 1/2 of the track was bland and predictable,

and it was awkward, and it nothing like what I hoped for, and nothing interesting happened until the end. But then it did happen.



“These nagging brats were here to spill hair dye on your living room carpet”





Author: naomi

Student, likes learning about foreign cultures, shall not divulge anymore so my identity is not exposed!

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